Zebra Novel
Mercs are causing trouble in my city. They are hunting someone, whatever the cost. It’s not like I... Read more
Mercs are causing trouble in my city. They are hunting someone, whatever the cost. It’s not like I care that some lowly humans died, but if I don’t act now it would set a bad example. So what would the hero do? Probably he would save the victims and protect them while the enemies keep coming…Yeah, as if I would ever do something so troublesome! They aren’t calling me the demon lord for no reason. I suppose I’ll just shoot the victim and be done with it. Collapse
Antihero Protagonist, Magic, Multiple POV, Non-human Protagonist, Strong to Stronger
1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled7. You are wandering why you are still readingthis8. You saw that mistake, right?(On 7)10. But did you see that I skipped 6?10. You checked11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw13. I also skipped 214. You got tricked15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! One of the best completed works I've read on here.Can't believe it took me so long to find. A brilliantly dark and humorous book with a satisfying ending.
average Andur story, if you like his other stories you will enjoy this one too.
Story isn't masterpiece but it is worth reading just finished fast paced but okay solid 5/10
Pretty good, not boring
That's a good read. Short, no major plot holes, characters develop and act as they are described. I didn't get the feeling of it being rushed, and ending is well defined: we get a glimpse of how current story ended and what are characters up to.
The first episodes are so boring that no one could go on and no proper commentary
Anyone have an opinion on this?
What's going on? I'm starting by taking a look at it and seeing how, any suggestions or warnings you can give me?
Well just finished the book and it definitely is nothing the adult tag lol.Overall it was a good story especially for so few chapters. There are some thing's that feel rushed or that you wish was played out more, but considering how short it is I think the author did a really good job of not leaving any big plot holes and at the end leaving me satisfied with the ending (though I wish we could continue their journey).
